Don't take the light from my world
Just as I'm starting to see
I've shined on the inside
Since the day
You breathed life into me
Don't take that breath away
Just as I'm learning to breathe on my own
My muse
My inspiration
Every word
On all my pages
Were written for you
Don't take away my words
And leave my pages blank
My kindred
My soulmate
Don't take the other half
Of my soul
And leave me cold and numb
Stay with me
Keep me whole
Don't break me
Tear me apart
Stay near me
Please help me keep
All my pieces together
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Written February 16th, 2005
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That's so sad...
oh wow that is so sad, and trust me i have fel this way before as well. it just feels like your getting your heart ripped out and that you just want to crawl under a rock forever. well i hope that things get better and i really loved this write. Great job and God bless.
~Jaid
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excellent, brilliant, intimate,
this is a poem i can fully identify with! you have put it so nicely, so beautifully! and itīs so true! -
don't remind me..great poem but I don't want a reminder
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Beautifully written. Raw emotions being poured out. I love the way its worded. You did an excellent job on this poem. That's all I can seem to say hehe. Wow. Beautiful. Keep up the great work. I'll try and read some of your other work.
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Lovely. An amazing piece that is full of emotion. I applaud you not only for your words, but for the courage to put those wrods on a site. I hope happy moments find you, wherever you may be. I hope you contiue to write. You did an amazing job on this, I may just have to check out some of your other works as well. Keep your head up!
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The notorious R -
OMG, this is simply beautiful, and something I can truly identify with! It takes great courage as well as being in tune with your own emotions to pen words like this!
Wishing you so many happy moments, and please, continue to write!
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