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Keep Me

You keep me from falling
Into the sky
Out of touch
With reality
Hold me down
Keep me sane
Stop the circus
In my mind
Keep me from falling
Into the darkness
Where it's cold
And it's only me
Alone with my mind

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Written February 16th, 2005

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  • Aimiemm28
    February 24, 2006
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    Wow, thank you...I don't know what to say....That's got to be one of the nicest comments anyone has ever given me.


  • onealone
    February 23, 2006
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    I like the movement of your mind...truly moving and beyond simplicity.


  • bw43
    February 27, 2005
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    "and it's only me with my mind" -- does that mean that the poem is dedicated to yourself? i was a little confused by that, though i loved it and would recommend absolutely NO changes!!! it was awesome. good work.


  • cherche -d -ame
    February 26, 2005
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    I liked the brevity of this...yet despite it you gave a complete version of needing someone that helps us from going insane at times...I think all can relate,
    Reenie