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Colour The Face

Colour the faces of friends with smiles
Watch how the sun shines in their eyes
Your love, your laughter, your essence
Your sorrow, your tears, your every presence

The way you speak to the ones around you
Shows them that your love is true
You show them all what you're made of
Every trouble you rise above

And every corner my life turns
You are there to show your concerns
No matter how I tell you not to care
When I fail, you are there

I wanna tell you it's you I appreciate
For it's the ones who hurt me that you hate
So colour the face of me, your friend
And I will be here for you right to the end.....

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This is dedicated to one of my best friends. You know who you are. :-)

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  • Shimmerysoup
    December 9, 2004
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    aww this is prettily written, I almost want to believe that life is really that way. Very well done on this, lovely work.


  • July 30, 2004
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    nothing more important than loyalty to our friends which you have closed this magnificent poem with that declaration... excellent

    billy


  • DarlingDeath
    July 30, 2004
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    This was a very beautiful dedication to what seems like a very deserving friend. Very well written. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
    ~Bork (lost love)


  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    November 30, 2001
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    Dyejunkie, yes of course it's fer you. Yer one of me best buddies petal. :-)


  • Mizpoeme
    November 26, 2001
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    Great Friendship poem.Cherish your true friends.


  • dyejunkie
    November 26, 2001
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    You told me this was for me...Does that mean I'm the 'one of your best friends'? Is it me? Is it me? Is it me? Is it me? XxxxxX


  • FallinTears
    October 26, 2001
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    It made me feel good!! This was a good read. I think that it's very true and I like the way you portrayed it!

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