THIS HATE THAT CONSUMES MY SOUL
IS DRIVING ME CRAZY
ALL THE RAGE THAT IS
OVER POWERING MY MIND
IS DRIVING ME INSANE
DEATH IS THE ONLY WORD I
CAN SEEM TO THINK
HATE IS OVERRIDING ALL
OF MY EMOTIONS
PAIN IT IS SOMETHING
I NOW RARELY FEEL
OTHER THEN WHAT IS IN MY HEART
THE BLOOD POURS
OUT OF ME,
BUT I FEEL NOT A
SINGLE SOLARITY THING
THE SMALL DROPLETS OF BLOOD
SOON TURN TO A DARK PUDDLE,
THAT COVERS THE AREA
OF THE WHOLE ENTIRE FLOOR
I LET OUT A DEEP BREATH
AND SOON AFTER I AM DEAD
Author notes
Written February 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- lover's suicide by Trueloveneverdies.
300 points, ended November 30, 2005, 23 entries
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lol sorry if it irked you .. lol i never realized the M was not captialized.. thanx
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Honestly, I couldn't get through it.. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but "DRIVEING" "INSAIN" and "OVERRIDEING" are misspelled, and I bugged me greatly.. And the "m" in Am is the only letter not captialized. The poem wasn't bad, that stuff just irked me. I do like the captialization of the whole poem because it emphasizes the pain.
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