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I Love You

I n this spell i have fallen

L onging for love and care
O nly to realize that one day
V ery soon, it would come to and end
E ven though you are gone from my sight

Y ou will always be in my mind
O h what day that will be when you return back to me
U ntil then i will wait and be together once again.

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i dont know about this one.. it's my first of this type.. so i hope i did good any suggestions appreciated.. thanks
Written February 15th, 2005

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  • Forgotten Heartbeat
    February 15, 2005
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    great job on this one especially is it is your first acrostic poem. hearing those 3 words..i love you..music to anyone's ears while in love with that special person that you can't live without. you've shown extreme passion and emotions in your words..amazing write..keep it up!.
    later
    love always..
    sarah jean