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Their Forever Love

Their Love is strong
They were meant to be

Forever their feelings bloom
Together they stay

Hidden inside,away from the surface
Deeply tucked is the undying love

Sweet love for each other
Lasting forever and always

Kagome and Inuyasha
This was meant to stay

Eyes upon the one they love
Seeing the true beauty

They will last for eternity
The love will not die

Kagome and Inuyasha

Author notes

idk...since u wanted me to add this..sadie!!!! there u go..and a perfect backround too!!!

Written February 15th, 2005

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  • x dark fairie x
    February 26, 2005
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    wow this piece is amazing, i like it lots. its writtern with so much feeling and emotion. its so sweet, i think that everyone wants love like this - i love the end. great job, well done (love your homepage btw! ... fairies rock!) -x-x-x-


  • mystic oceania
    February 15, 2005
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    i love the background and the pic is cute trish you gots a chance but then you will have two trophy's and i will still have none cuz my poems are suckish so....idk lol! anyways beautiful poem and BLEC to saying you cant write inuyasha and kagome poems!
    much love
    ~mystic