Have I told you that I love you;
that the thought of you is maddening?
Have I said it to you lately;
that the lack of you, it saddens me?
Have I told you that I hate you;
that you've changed me without knowing?
Have I cursed you out loud
for the emotions I've been showing?
Have I told you that I'm drowning;
that no one else can save me?
Or have I just been blinded
by the sweet words that you say to me?
Have I told you that I love you?
Do you know it? Do you see it?
Have I said the words I need to say?
...because I'm not sure you feel it...
Author notes
Written February 15th, 2005
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ummmmmmmm special! lol im only 12 (kid always) and i like fun and eciting poems but also the incredibly dark poems and some poems that are kinda in the middle i favor yoursweet666 poems theyre awesome. (dark tho) but thats not a bad thing! ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... hmmmm lets see... lol jk i love this poem and dont ever stop wriing' plus, your backround really fits this poem! AND you have some nice rhyming words! i really enjoyed your poem!!!!!
~~~ LuLu P.S. Incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
iD APPALUD YOU IF I HAD ANOUGH POINTS!
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Ahhh...a very lovely poem! Sad and uncertain in a way.....but then I like reading sad poems since the make happy poems even happier. Y'know, that whole emotional balance thing. Can't have one side without having the other. Best wishes and
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Thank you very much
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you're most welcome
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Thank you for pointing that out!!
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He's read it...And yes, he got the message ^.^ Was a touchy time, but this helped me express some things I couldn't then.
Thank you
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Thank you very much
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hm I was hoping that I came across a metered poem. A little tweeking and you could turn this into one. I do love it though...all the questions you ask. It is a very interesting poem.
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ver interesting, not sure i altogether understand it...but it is really good, i can see that you are showing that you love and hate somebody, or that is what i think, that you love someone, but because you love them so much, you hate them as you cannot live without them, am i somewhere near?! well done anyway, certainly got me thinking! xxx-xxx
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Well this sounds like you are really confused...and feel
trapped by your own feelings for this person...
a lot of ambivalence going on here...and your words
clearly spell that out...
you do not ask for critical review...but i thought
you might want me to point out that i think you
forgot a word in the last stanza...first line...
you say: "Have told you that I love you?"...and
i think you meant to put an "I" in there and say...
"Have I told you that I love you?"
Thank you for sharing this piece
UB
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Love 'em hate 'em
Can't live with them, can't live without them. Apparently
you haven't told him. Send him this....that'll get him.
Desiree
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