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Lesson in Life

I wish I could say life is easy
But it's not, it's a long hard road
Yet wherever life may lead you
You don't have to travel alone

There's always someone beside you
If His presence you'll let yourself feel
And if you listen with your heart ,instead of your mind
You'll find out that Jesus is real

He'll carry you through the hard times
If in your heart you believe
He'll fight the battles for you
For He is all you need

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Written February 15th, 2005

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  • Wordpainter
    March 13, 2005
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    beautful and wise wisdom

    you did it again sis You said all that needed to be heard you spoke the truth from your heart i know you know what your talking about because i know you've been there and Jesus was there for you! Beautiful written with good thoughts!


  • Vickie J
    February 22, 2005
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    Beautifully written and truthfully spoken. Excellent!


  • budlem
    February 16, 2005
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    Wonderful written...we are never alone. Jesus works through the spirits that guide us. ~Bud~


  • qnhoneybee
    February 16, 2005
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    This is very beautiful and quite inspirational. It is comforting to know that Jesus is always there. He's in our hearts and He's guiding our lives and keeping us protected. People misunderstand and think that if there were a God we would have no troubles but that is not the case. Even Jesus suffered many hardships during His stay in this world. Jesus died to save us from our sins and He suffered as He did to be able to better understand our misgivings that make fall just short of His glory so He can sanctify us. A perfect World comes when He returns and we go to Heaven. As you can see this piece really moved me. I can see why you were invited to this contest.


  • leannewales
    February 15, 2005
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    A very beautiful piece Bertie....soft and flowing with a lovely message...so typically "you"...bless you...leanne xxx

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