a
sparrow
sits atop
wondrous
snow covered
evergreen tree
patiently awaits
bitter cold wind
to be replaced by
the renewal of spring
a time to create new life
fledglings to test their wings
fly among the spreading yews
thirst quelled as tiny buds bloom
when mother nature opens the sky
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Written February 15th, 2005
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What a neat little write. So full of wonder and hopeful expectation, as it should be, considering the subject. You are a masterful writer!
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Thank you so much Sam. I appreciate your Congratulations. Take care, Sandy
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congrats on your trophy!!!!!
S♥m
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Thank you so much Sam. I owe all my writing talents to our dear Lord. Thank you for your warm and lovely comment. I always appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you queenie for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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Sandy...this is truly awesome. I am very impressed with how easy you make this form seem. Your talent always shines brightly. A wonderful read.
S♥m
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this makes you long for the spring.it's warm and light.it flows with the feel of a sunny day.this meets the form head on.you are blessed.
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Thank you so much Bluemoon for the lovely comments. I always appreciate them. Take care and God Bless. Sandy
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I can not wait till it stays nice. I miss working out in the yard. It won't be long. Thank you Ann for the heartwarming comment. You makes me smile. I'm going to nickname you Lady Sunshine. Thank you a big bunch for everything. Take care, God Bless you. Sandy
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Hi there,
First of all I would like to thank you for the lovely comments. I found this a lovely poem, with so much warmth and love showing through. I really love the style of your poem too. It had great imagery and description. Keep up the great work.
Best of wishes to you and yours
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Sandy, the is beautiful what gorgeous visions...didn't like the bee sting, lol, could actually feel that one...Just as you put this in words, we will wake up one moring very soon and hear the songbirds, I can't wait! This was a pleasure once again to read, I think you are the master of this form, have read others and no one can do this as well as you my friend, all the best in the contest..and by the comments it looks like everyone loves it! God Bless you, Ann >
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Thanks so much for the warm and lovely comment Chris . I can not wait till Spring comes. I hate the winter after the Christmas holidays. Take care, and God bless my brother. Sandy
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Thank you pozo my friend. I hope all is well with you. Take care, Sandy
God Bless you
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Thank you so much Miss Mia Donna, it is always a pleasure to hear from you. You take care. God Bless you. Sandy
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It was in the 50's here today. I could get use to this warm winter weather. I know there is more cold temperatures on the way but I will keep wishing for Spring. Thank you Tamara for the lovely comment. Take care my friend. As always it is nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it. I love the form you created and the great contest. Take care, Sandy
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Nothing like the sun and flowers in bloom to make a heart warm from a recent chill Sandy. Makes us too think and know that often after life’s storms in life the sun will shine again. Sweetly leaves a warm feeling this poem.
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Beautiful write which I liked a lot, keep writing because this was fantastic
All the best,
Pozo
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Aww how cute! It was very springy indeed, and "spring sings" is so adorable.
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how gorgeous it is to see the blue bird and the robin out today gazing all the worms and insects out at play
spring is near for the flocks are headed North
thank goodness the winter is far behind us
you pen it so well of my sentiment today!
to my Sis in Chris
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Ah, the sweet sounds of spring. It's almost around the corner too and I saw the rabbits popping out last week. A beautiful poem that reminds us all of this season. You did a fine job with everything. Thank you for entering and good luck!
~CT
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