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Preheat butter.
Make it boil.

Mix your water
With my oil.

Close your eyes
And stare at me...
Believe in only
what you see.

Scrape away
The orange rust.

Dabble me
With pixie dust.

Speak the words
That only sing
In lullabies
To everything.

Lift my lid off
Pour you in...

Set the timer—

Let me begin.



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Have a taste.
Written February 15th, 2005

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  • Kalima
    April 24, 2007

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    What else can I say that I or anybody hasn't already said. You are very amazing! Keep it up!
    Stacey:


  • MissStranger
    July 12, 2006
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    Who are you?...Why are you?...Hmmm...I think I'll taste this lines one more time.

  • tornsky
    February 17, 2005
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    lol! this was cool..not the stuff i usually like to read but your writing style is very different and refreshing

    Close your eyes
    And stare at me...
    Believe in only
    what you see.

    i liked that stanza the best! i love it! thank you
    ~Linds


  • Blind-Ambition
    February 16, 2005
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    you've done it once again... a deceptively simple poem with lovely imagrey and much thought behind it. I love it. as always, keep it up.


  • Roxy02
    February 16, 2005
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    Dabble me
    With pixie dust

    What a fantastic line! I loved this poem, as with your other work I have read. This was simply marvellous, it seems you can take anything and turn it into a wonderful poem so I congratulate you!

  • honeybe
    February 15, 2005
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    intersting, very intersting. liked it. its complex, yet very simplistic. nice combination. keep it up. later Honeybe


  • unicorn375
    February 15, 2005
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    that was so sweet, i love it, great job.


  • TangerinePuddle
    February 15, 2005
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    Greg, that was truly wonderful....short, sweet and amazing.


  • PurpleSky
    February 15, 2005
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    hmmm now this does not sound to bad at all and very yummy lol. You did a wonderful job on this and the creativity! thanks for an interesting yet enjoyable read.
    love and hugs
    ~Lena~

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    February 15, 2005
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    Mmmmmm... Sounds as if it's a treat . POssibly a tempting Strawberry confection? Best wishes... ~genielassie~


  • x-TeenageDrama
    February 15, 2005
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    OMG! This sounds yum I want some lol...This was delicious poem.. Hope you had a good Valentines day with this recipe..!!
    <3 -Slurry- xxoo


  • DreamAngel
    February 15, 2005
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    wonderful. nicely written.what more can i say? =)


  • miss-nikki-michele
    February 15, 2005
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    Ohhhhh This is simply WONDERFUL

    I wish I could applaud this 753896789769802768927698257895729879258675829672 times, because that is how much I love love love love love it!!! Really....I am adding this to my favorites, definatly. I love every BIT of it, especially,

    Lift my lid off
    Pour you in...

    And your author comments....mmmmmm
    XoXo
    NiKKi

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