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evermore retrospect

retrospect is stripes
where drawing feels like shame

retrospect is stripes
is pulling on the chain and going to a place
where drawing feels like shame

retrospect is where drawing feels


retrospect

turning in the brackish sky
the key is held its place
the sea is held its race
branding out a blackish eye
the he is held his mace
the she is held her face
and looking out
 on the gentle time
and falling back
 on the graceful lines
the solitude is spent
in dewey retrospect

Author notes

chapter four aka. the end. whew!
for a better indication of where this subtractive, and exhausting, process started, begin with "retrospect" and continue moving up the list through "retrospect continued" and "furtherance"
Written February 14th, 2005

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