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furtherance

retrospect is stripes
drawing feels like shame

frozen always over
writes mellow
of slaves antiquity
staves ubiquity

take is where
we a new take here
take rake
forsake
spread out our lies
spread out our lives

Author notes

keep going! this is part three.
Written February 14th, 2005

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