I have a fetish that I hide from view
Eating the dead is my secret pleasure
On their decaying genitals I chew
From their dark deep grave I find my treasure
First I find a grave, dig up my meal
Then remove the body, cut out my food
Their decayed and infested skin I peel
In a sickly ritual most call crude
I met a girl who shared my evil life
We fell in love over decayed dinners
When we met I knew she would be my wife
Pair made in hell, we were perfect sinners
On our first date we ate a 3 course meal
After each organ our lips always met
With Satan we made our beloved deal
A date for marriage was hastily set
We lived in deep love, never ate alone
Until that sad night that we were found out
We were torn apart, first time on our own
We would be sentenced death I didn't doubt
The day that I died, I saw her burning
The sight hurt more than the stake and fire
To see my love once more I was yearning
As we burn in hell, our love all admire
Author notes
Written February 14th, 2005
option 7
A contest entry
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Comments
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I don't know, I mean this poem is quite extreme. I'm not denying that I like it but I'm quite scared that I DO like it!! Thanks for entering it into my contest though = ]
--Stardust xx
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Thank you for your entry and good luck
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Please put the option number.
~Asa of the Stingingly Unkind Jellyfish of the Trunks -
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it is there
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Excellent
Dark and wicked the cannibals of hell do munch together on rotting genitals, dark with a hint of sex and purification by the staked fire of morality. Excellent and dark, good luck in the contest.
Georges. -
Interesting. Very graphic. I'm not really sure how I feel about this poem
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I love the darkness you laced so perfectly into this. It was astounding, keep it up.
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Very well written. Great way to start off my contest. Thank you so much for the entry. A very lovely, dark poem.
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Now that was deep and dark. very well written. It had very strong emotions in it that you expressed very clearly although the visuals I got weren't very nice at all. But thats my imagination. Cool write
Mia
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Sick and twisted to the core.. I love how you're not affraid to show who you are! It's wonderful to be so free.. the love you share over such an odd ritual.. one of love and lust. Oh.. Valentines Day is made of this!
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Disturbing I must first say.... but.... great! First of I need to critique this. I do feel that you need to go through this write and capitalize all the "I's" lil' "I's" make the person seem insignificant, and this person is definantly important!!! As for this piece in general, it is crude, sick and disturbing... I LOVE IT! Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!
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oh my god dude,......you had me at genitals.
lol
This was sick!!!
And I mean that in a good way. anything I read especially dark poetry, if it doesn't make me cringe or make my hairs stand, then it failed to inspire me. This was very expressive and well told of this dark passion and way of life.
This Demonic love needs no exorcism!!!
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Eww, nice poem but what a disgusting thing to write about! I shuddered as I read this, although more because of the talent you show than the sickening nature of your words. This is very good, well-written and gruesomely descriptive!
Well done, keep it up! (But please try to write about something less vomit-inducing next time! lol, only joking, write what you want!)
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Frighteningly Spudly
Messed up man, good but messed up
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your not a cannibal corpse fan by any chance are you? lol
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eww. descriptively wicked. I love it. It's kind of sweet in a twisted sort of way. Your verses paint a gory wonderful detailed picture. Excellent write.
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Wow, I was kind of iffy on this one at first but I kept reading and I like it. Very well written and it's a love story I could get into, lol. Nice write! ^_^
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wow...lol I don't even know what to say, so i will just do what "Smoochie" did and say Happy Valentines Day! lol
-CoLe
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Wow! Certainly some interesting imagery going on there. Its obviously not going to appeal to a lot of people but its very well written once you get past the shock value. I,myself, enjoy the occasional look into the darker recesses of the human psyche. I enjoyed it. Good read, keep up the great work.
~Blessings~
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It was good, well written....quite odd. But odd poetry stands out and should be reconized the same as orginal. So that's why I say good job to you!
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Mmm.. Tasty. A wonderful, dark poem. What on earth was your inspiration for this? I like it a lot. Absolute gore and tasty chicken-like flesh. Delicious.
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This is interesting. Not too sure how to comment on it so I will just wish you a Happy Valentines Day ♥Smoochie
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Lol, this is very sick, but stranglely cool too! It takes a great (or dememnted) mind to think up something like this! Job Well Done!!
Mandi -
Bravo
Very sick, but sick is what I like. I especially liked in this poem the part about rotting genetials, it just seemed to plunge the poem down into a new dark low. Bravo my friend, bravo -
very very sick but strangley cool. he he, well done on the write. claire x
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wow this is a wicked poem!you are by far the sickest poet!(i mean that in a good way dude!) you are one of my favorite poets just to let you know!you express this in a love/evil way which makes it unbearable not to read! i love it!great job!
~rachelle
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