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Can of Diet Coke
with only one calorie.
Why leave it in there?
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Author notes
I've always wondered why they can't get the last one out.
Written September 26th, 2002
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A nice punchline.
You made a great haiku and I'm not a big fan of haiku's.
Well done!
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I loved this
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Very cute :-)
I think its cool that people call pull off humor in a haiku, pretty good way to write one-liner's :-)
Enjoyed this,
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wow great why!! very nice ending 'why leave it in there' i LOVE diet coke!!!! mmmmmmmmmm its so addictive! lol but the calorie..... ewwwwwwwww!! anyways very nice write! pretty talented work! keep it up!
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why leave it in there...nice ending with the touch of humour that haikus like to have..excellent
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excellent
I came back to read this...OMG@Zez's comment..ICK@Nando's....I am now switching to anything else BUT Diet Coke
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hehe~ cute haiku
i truly enjoyed!!!
visit my page soon, i have many haikus
thanx soooooo much for sharing -
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i don't think it matters. diet coke tastes like shit anyway. funny haiku. i don't even like haikus and i liked this one. -
don't touch it!
Lol! Yeah, why not remove 'em all! Cute little haiku here! Will be checking out more of your writes. Enjoyed! ;)Kelly -
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lol!
:0)
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Cause with out that one little calorie you would relinquish the sweetness of the forbidden ;-) Good write! -
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i've always wondered that myself
LOL cute haiku!
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'Cause to remove all the calories, they'd have to get rid of the fingers and rat droppings. -
don't touch it!
hahahahahaha, this cracks me up. its in there so you can think about it, or its in there cos somebody may be jackin off in the mix, so they gotta put that in as a disclaimer. -
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cute.....dang, now I'll be pondering that question all day.
Haiku's can become addictive, can't they........ -
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So you can drink it, no? Hmmm, now I'm confused.
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