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Being Sick

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I hate being sick
It makes me feel ick
I just lie in bed
My arms feeling like lead
I can't eat a thing
Or my stomach goes cha-ching!
And then I get nauseous
which makes me so cautious
I can barely drink
And my feet really stink
After coughing and wheezing
And hacking and sneezing
I sleep, wake up sweating
Then my mom starts fretting
She thinks I have fever
What should I do? Leave her?
No. Just 'cause my head feels
as light as a feather
Doesn't mean I can't keep
my sights on getting better!

Author notes

I've had the flu for 3 weeks...decided if nothing good can come out of this, I might as well make fun of it. and there ya go.
Written February 14th, 2005

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  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    February 18, 2005
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    hehe thanks a bunch - and I'm almost better...I'm still coughing a lot tho. oh well, at least the flu part is gone. anyways thanks for the comment. it made me smile.

    MORSMORDRE!
    - The Dark Lady


  • Quabben
    February 18, 2005
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    very good

    If you can write poetry like this when you are sick, you won't be sick for long. Keep the smile on your dial and I hope you are fully recovered now.


  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    February 14, 2005
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    dude...you thought this was serious??? look at the category. H-U-M-O-R. hehehe


  • WiCcAnXtWiStEd
    February 14, 2005
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    oh dear god.... wow..... I hope this wasnt meant to be a ummm how shall i say this.... a serious writing experience....cuz....wow..... lol had me laughin tho.... great write