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I'm all alone

I'm all alone
Walking down this lonely road
Darkness is all I see
It surrounds me
Pulling me into its deathly grin
Grabbing my arm and not letting me go
Pulling me deeper and deeper inside its core
I run as fast as I can
All alone
Down this lonely road
Darkness is all I see
As it surrounds me
Its deathly grin smiling down at me
Pulling me deeper and deeper
Not letting me go

As I try to set myself free
I'm pulled in again
Not able to breath
My eyes start to close
As this is my last look
At this shitty world
As I start to die
I feel myself going numb...

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I'm working on this, I dont know where this came from. Its shitty, but I tried.
Written February 14th, 2005

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