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what a dish

i love my manager a whole lot,
he taste good when days are hot.

when he's naked, what a dish,
that could be my only wish.

black, white, frogs or toads,
even mexicans all a mode.

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Written February 13th, 2005

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  • Twisted--Rose
    February 19, 2005
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    HA! this is sooooo funny! I love it! there's only one thing that I don't understand, though. I don't get the last 2 lines.... lol! xxx
    Edited on Feb 19, 7:01 because ''.

  • funniestcracker
    February 14, 2005
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    WOW FUNNY CRACKER! You are so talented. Your funny. Good job there sweetie! HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! Your best friend loves you!. Yes thats right she told me so. So I know ANYWAYS nice job.....haha Good luck in my contest you silly goosely person!

    FUNNIESTCRACKER