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Happy Valentine's Day!

My sweetheart, you always make me feel special every, single day...You take my breath away and return it as if you where the only air that fills my lungs...

Giving love as you do life, creating my days with the sunshine you beam brightly upon my face, I gaze into your precious angel eyes, and fall deeper in love with you each passing sunrise...

Love is forever in your heart that I feel with each caress of your soft fingertips, leaving me the view of the windows to your soul, your pools of blue that comfort me within your gentle gaze...

You are truly beautiful, and I am happy that I'm spending my every heartbeat with you, each song that flows through my soul is made to make you whole, for in your hard times, you've been there to uplift me, this being what I long to do for you...

Happy Valentine's Day my sweetheart, I'll be yours forevermore, as we hold a special love, sincere, and beyond compare... For within your arms I shall live and die, giving my first and last breath to you and only you, for I have been shown your love, and I'll never stop loving you...



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A letter of love I would like to share with you all, thanks for reading me, and have a Happy Valentine's Day!
Written February 13th, 2005

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  • sfesquivel
    March 20, 2005
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    Wowwwwww!!! This is awesome and I liked the background. So sweet of you and you're one of the best I've known. Thanks for sharing what you have. Keep it up!

  • Neveah xx Ren Nyoko
    February 19, 2005
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    This was just amazing, it's so sweet. I bow to you, keep it up


  • magicalprincess
    February 18, 2005
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    lovely

    This poem is very beautiful Your Valentine must love it!!!!
    i love the colors it fits perfextly with the poem!!!!
    thanx for sharing and thanx for commenting on my poem!!!
    much love
    Magicalprincess


  • Midnight Lace
    February 15, 2005
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    This is such a sweet love letter. You have penned it every so nicely and I think the white on red adds to it. You did an excellent job on it. ♥Smoochie


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    February 15, 2005
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    Happy Valentines Day to you and your Beloved Family for all Eternity!

    FOLLOW THE SUN
    And to our children’s children, I’d like to say
    That on one magical Valentines Day
    I met a prince with azure eyes of blue
    That cast a spell to hypnotize us as we
    Our magic shall always be
    free to live our lives in synchronicity
    He held me closely in his dreams
    With wet and wild enchanted streams
    His soul was mine to touch
    And we as us just fell in love
    The prince has come to shed some light
    And lead his lady thru the night
    And castles tall in lands of sun
    The princess dreamed that they were one
    The prince saw into her very soul
    Sharing grand love tales from days of old
    I know you desired me from the start
    You shot that bullet right thru my heart
    For me there can never be another one
    Cause with you I am the morning sun
    And on one magical summers day
    In the green forest of fair
    The princess reached out to hold his hand
    And touch his golden hair
    Together they walked thru mountain streams
    Together they loved like their dreams
    And all the animals of the forest fair
    Put lilacs, lilies and dew drops in their hair
    And the prince and princess laughed as one
    As there, love grew under a never-ending sun


  • PurpleSky
    February 15, 2005
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    yup there is all that love that is in your heart overflowing. this was very sweet and a perfect valentines letter.
    love and hugs
    ~Lena~

  • confusedone
    February 15, 2005
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    That is pretty awesome. You did an awesome job on this. If it's dedicated to anyone, then that person is very lucky. I may have to jack this from ya to say it to my g/f. HA HA, jk. Once again, awesome job. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!!

  • fire and rain
    February 15, 2005
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    All of these wonderful love poems, sure do put me in the mood for love. So nice of you to share a wonderful write like this.


  • effundo
    February 15, 2005
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    Err dude it was yesterday lol.

    Expected to feel romantic for a nanno second

    but wasn't

    it was much longer.


  • Isi
    February 15, 2005
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    a sweet letter you've written, I'm sure your love will melt while reading


  • Eruvande Almare
    February 15, 2005
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    AWWWWWWWWWWW! SOoooooooooooooooooooo sweet! I like it very much, very romantic and beautifully written! I especially liked:

    Love is forever in your heart that I feel with each caress of your soft fingertips, leaving me the view of the windows to your soul, your pools of blue that comfort me within your gentle gaze...

    So descriptive!


  • Nicholemarie
    February 14, 2005
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    AWWAWAWWAWAWAWWA A perfect write.... And this is one of the most beautiful thing I have ever heard,read,and felt.... This is so amazing.... And your wife is so lucky to have a true romantic like you..... So great write and keep it up... Heather
    Sweet Soul


  • poeticpieces
    February 14, 2005
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    Lovely!

    Beautiful write Dad, as always, you pen from within so lovely, Happy Valentine's Day to you, and thanks for sharing this, great job, I it!!!

    -lil Tim


  • lady8
    February 14, 2005
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    Your words floated through the air as if they came right out of your heart.Seems you have been blessed with a great love.Hope your days together and every valentine here after is as lovely as your write,
    Lady8


  • smiley
    February 14, 2005
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    this was wonderful.. Thanks for sharing a piece of your love.


    Yvonne

  • angeledtweety
    February 14, 2005
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    awesome

    this is so sweet..it shows your love so deeply..and written so beautiful..


  • twinzy001
    February 14, 2005
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    this is beatiful poem for a beautiful soul..HAPPY VALENTINES DAY


    twinzy001


  • Diamond
    February 14, 2005
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    Beautifully Penned.

    AWW Timothy, your letter is so beautiful and filled with love for your sweetheart. She's a very fortunate young lady to have such a gem of a man like you. Happy Valentine's Day to you both. All my love, Avril


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    February 14, 2005
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    How beautiful. Today is the day that the poeticweaver weaves his magic love words and drops them gently on all the hearts who care to hear them. Stunningly wonderful Happy Valentine's Day!

    ~Lyrical


  • Sunkissedrose
    February 14, 2005
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    awwwww... so beautifully sweet. Happy Valentines Day Bro, she is truly lucky to have such a wonderful heart loving her. I enjoyed reading this piece of work, thank you so much for sharing this letter, and a piece of you on this day.


    s
    ~Carrie

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