Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

dear anchor

i turned it up
to drown them out

drown them out

drown them

out

-- but it was me

who was
is
going under

nothing to hold onto
no one to call out to

and my last words were,
"i'd bleed for days ...
so you don't hurt so much"

... and my head becomes
in vis i ble



Author notes


Written February 14th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)