Pick up your feline feet baby
Pad your way over to me
I'll take you in these arms of mine
We'll swing to a different beat
You know it's right baby
Just hold on to my heart
I'll be loving till the crack of dawn
When all over again I'll start
Don't walk away from me baby
I love those things you do
I'll beg and beg and beg again
To strut alongside you
You know I love you so much baby
Don't see me as just a tom cat
I'm the Prince of your Boulevard
Come on baby, don't think like that
Pick up your feline feet baby
Swing on round today
I'll take you in these arms of mine
Cos I am here to stay
Author notes
Written on 14th February 2005 at 05:05 GMT
The love between Disney's Duchess and Thomas O'Malley from The Aristocats.
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meow
Hello. I like how it's got a sort of song-lyric wording to it. The rhyme is good...it definitely flows well. But that also, I think, has to do with it's song-lyric feel and wording.
Sweet, sweet kitty love. It's been so long since I've seen the Aristocats. Thanks for entering my contest.
-Meg
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Great Write!!!
aww I really got to say soo sweet and adorable
I love this poem well done!!!keep on writing and thank you for entering our contest I really appreciated it
mina
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This is a good poem . I enjoyed it, and it is unique too. I havent seen the aristocats in ages, but this has brought memories of the film back to me. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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congratulations!
tosses flowers
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Lovely dialog good fun, all the best in comp
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the aristocats!
excellent work sweetie.
this is vcery original. this is what i wanted to see.
the ryhme and meter are perfect. the short lines. easy to read, strong. witty and just all around slick stuff.
the thing i think is so good, is that it stands out alone. even if it hadnt of been written for the contest.
this one is my favorite.
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This made me smile. I could hear the charcter voices inmy head as i read this and it brought the movie back to life again in my head. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering our contest and good luck to you!
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This was cute...adorable...sweet. You did a excellent job on it. I really loved reading it. Best of wishes to you in the contest. ♥Smoochie
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This is wonderful sweetie. Good luck in the contest.
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thats really beautiful. keep up the writing, and do it more often (i know i haven't been writing much either)
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