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Written February 13th, 2005
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another fantastic shapped piece. this kind of blows you away when you read it. (you have incredible formatting patience). excellent, creative, brilliant. keep it up! <3
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this is so cool. it took me a few seconds to figure out what was going on with the letters but after that, wow, this is just really really amazing. must have taken forever to format too. great job on this!
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this is just awesome...so creative. i would never have come up with an idea like this. its like art inside art, if that makes since...anyways great job!
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Whoa. Let me tell you again: WHOA! It took me a minute, but I got the words. That was so cool! It blows my mind. I loved the formation of the words. The art of shape poetry group is the class you did this for, right? I give you an A+. Hurrah!
Hey... it's kind of weird. Mrs. James told me how to say "don't touch me" today in French because I asked her about the word "touch." I put it on the silver pens message board, so you can go read it. And that's precisely what your poem is about. Nuts, I tell you.
I'm off to read more of your poetry... I'm reading your poetry, finally! I'm on for more than 5 minutes!



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