Tongue's caress of flesh so soft
over lace and velvet treasure
Heat rising through so quick,
arching backs and pleasurable moans
Silken hands roaming over bedding,
grabbing loosely, then tightly
Rapturing through the body from
a loving touch of provoking bliss
The quivering all over as it
hits powerfully, left weak and panting
Music to ears of the giver
Encouragement for the tasting of sweetness
Exchange of positions
Silk moving throughout warmth
Pulse quickening and heat building
Groans audible, bucking slowly, painfully
Louder still, emitting from the throat,
verbal signs of encouragement and wonder
In and out faster still, silky flesh
gently and smoothly moving through wetness
Hot and salty swallows,
enjoying each and every drop
Taking greedily as the giver
before had done earlier on
Licking the last morsel off tender skin
Moans audible and continuous
with gentle thrusts as the giver
slowly and cruelly teases
A sly smile with white, wet lips
A deep kiss of eternal taste
A slow entrance, a passionate thrust
Musical collaberation of passion
Slowly rising and then dying
as the two lovers fall asleep
through their love and mixed bliss
of union of love and commitment
Author notes
I commented on The Slave by We Both.
Written February 13th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Transcendence Is Within Your Reach! by melpomene.
450 points, ended February 27, 2005, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your comment. I appreciate your kind words. My AP mom, Princess Muse, inspires me when it comes to my erotica. She also helps me with some of my stories and poetry to do with it. If you want awesome erotica, you can check out her or more of mine if you'd like. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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tastiful!
First things first: Thanx muchly for entering my contest. Your poem will definitely be accounted for.
Secondly: I bow to you. This was the true essence of erotica. It was sensual, sexual, and subtle. I have to say I give you mad props on your metaphor. I liked the title, and I wasn't qwuite sure I understood why until I read this. I mean, the entire metaphor, of orgasm being beautiful music to 'the giver', or in general is astounding. The idea was everpresent. It was understood, implied. But I haven't read about anyone taking the time to actually say it in words as erotic and pulse-quickening as this. You succeeded in getting me hot under the collar. It was perfect! -
Almost everything erotic that I write is based on them because their relationship is ideally erotic and loving. The only things that probably aren't based on them are some hardcore ones I've written, which are few, and Pleasure Earned, though I can see her whipping him and him being chained up....Hm...
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This sounds like a poem about 'them.' I'm not sure though. Nevertheless, it's a beautiful poem with lots of imagery. Like it lots.
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Very beautiful job sweetie.
I love reading your erotica stuff cause it's so beautifully written.
♥
~Angel
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