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Dad

Dad I can't believe you
Look at what you did
Why did you help bring me into this world
If you had no intention to care
I'm not a little girl anymore
I know exactly what you mean
Your sorry you had me
I was your worst mistake.
But why am I being punished
For something you did wrong
When I didnt ask you and mom to get together
Or ask to be born.
I know you dont care
But it hurts to know what you did
If I would have had cancer again
You would still be here
I'm sorry I'm not dying
So you can be a Dad
But yet you can be a father to Ian and Logan
I can't seem to comperhend
Why you can be involved with my little brothers
When I'm your only daughter
And just because you had me in highschool
You think that you can ignore me.
It bothers me that you think your my Dad
When you haven't seen me in 9 years.
Yeah your a gread dad
Especially when the only thing you ever gave me
Was cancer.
I guees your father of the year
Since you never see me
And yet causes me so many problems
When I was little
I used to think you cared
But now I know how stupid I was.
Dad I'm sorry your and asshole
But you need to understand
I hate you
And will NEVER forgive you
For what you did.

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for my Dad

Written February 13th, 2005

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  • FunnyCracker
    April 5, 2005
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    wow, that was a very powerful piece. and very relatable for some girls, i sorta relate my dads been in my life but he's just a dick head. anyway good job i really liked this and good luck in the contest.