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Out for a Walk







out for a walk
to escape her
complaining
the cold north wind
burns my ears











Andrew Hide
13~02~2005

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Written February 13th, 2005

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  • Emerald13
    June 16, 2005
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    hehe lovely .... no question here of what is going on ... love the burning ears juxtaposition .... very nice .... >>> EM


  • nunchaks
    February 27, 2005
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    good

    mysterious, but good. I like this very much. I like the style of this haiku. This is very inspiring.

    Well done


  • Lonely
    February 27, 2005
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    good

    the cold north wind burns my ears.... there is a kind of anger in this poem... that I feel from the word "burn" ... You do so good with this form of poetry.. great write again

    ~ Lonely


  • Deke
    February 16, 2005
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    It is good to get out for a walk now and then--especially to get away from a woman's complaining. Excellently written.
    Damon D. Brewer


  • Sherry gold member
    February 14, 2005
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    Ouch, sounds painful not pleasent indoors or out but you you've reflected the feelings of two situations either being the best. Well written my friend. Sherry


  • Alahmorah
    February 14, 2005
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    Ha!!
    Great job. Ahh...my ears are cold right now...
    Love, Ashlee

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