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You, Me, We

You hold my heart in your hands
You just don't know it
You are either ignorant or
You don't want to see it

I am in love with you
I want you to know
I don't want to lose you
I can't go on without you

We should try it
We might go far
We may be forever
We won't know unless we try

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Written December 26th, 2004

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  • lovelovepalooza.
    May 9, 2005
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    awww this is so sweet!! very cute poem and great work..*

  • Alicia-marie
    March 5, 2005
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    thanks hunny! i know...but the hard part is waiting. *sigh*

    alicia:-0

  • raynie-night
    March 5, 2005
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    10/10

    Hey sweetie! Im sooo sorry your going throught this, but one day he will see! After he finally realizes that your truly in love with him and then...you will be blessed
    Good poem i really liked it!

    Keep It Up,
    ~Andrea~


  • The Eros
    February 23, 2005
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    three stanzas and three ideas pulled together nicely ,ignorance of a loved one , a pain yet the desire to be loved and love ! nice write keep penning

    Eros