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Final Goodbye

My life can't go on
You all made it like this
My life is a living hell
Why must you all do this to me

You taunt and tease me
Make me feel so much less
You know who you are
Just wishing you weren't

Maybe I brought it on
Did I ask for it
Maybe you are just jerk
Randomly picking someone to torment

I hate you
All of you
For all you've done
I can't stand the way you are

To my family and friends
I love you all
It's not your fault
This is my final goodbye

Author notes

I was watching a movie with a kid that was being picked on killing themselves, and it inspired me to write this.
Written December 26th, 2004

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  • The Eros
    February 14, 2005
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    the poems shows exactly what is should show , despair and disturbance , which is whether becuase of fate or the deeds done in unknown time...nice poem