What is wrong with you
Can't you see me
I am standing right here
Opening my heart to you
You talk to me everyday
I guess you are blind
Looking at me like a book
Laughing like you don't understand
I am here
You are too
I am in love
Give me a chance
If you can't see it
You are crazy
Just pay more attention
Things like this aren't hard to miss
Please say something to me
No more small talk
I want to talk about us
What could happen but never will
Author notes
Written December 26th, 2004
A contest entry
- My Heart Will Go On by angelic1.
300 points, ended March 31, 2005, 48 entries
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Good Write
I didn't like this poem, not because of the way you wrote it, please no offense. It was amazing. It just struck me so hard on an emotional note I am going through, the exact opposite of this poem. I am the one rejecting. However, you are an amazing writer because of the way you can connect and disturb other peoples feelings. -
i know you dont know me, but i read this poem and i was just blown away because you described what i am feeling with this guy. its like its so obvious that there is something there and he just seems to ignore it.. this is a great write
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