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Salvation

trail of tears
we shall all shed for years,
you were crucified upon the cross,

on that day God's only begotten son was lost,
to forgive all of our sins your life was the cost,

freeing our souls from all damnation,
bringing exaltation,
salvation.

Author notes

This is a Tros-par-Huit form (three stannzas by eight lines)
Written February 13th, 2005

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