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In Your Presence



How beautiful you are to me
So tremulous in the knees I become
your stare hinders my every fiber
If only you would succumb

In your presence
I can hardly breath
With that devastating smile
I want you for my very own
If only for a while


If only I could tell you
My emotions withheld inside
With every passing day
It gets more difficult to hide

In your presence
I want to savor your mouth on mine
Bestow a kiss upon your lips
The pleasure, so divine

If only I could have you
My special Valentine....





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Written February 13th, 2005

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  • PoetryGrl2
    April 6, 2005
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    Awesome

    Wow, I am amazed. So much power