At her zenith,
the hypnotic, turquoise goddess
frigid in jubilation
vaporized us all...
waxen kamikaze.
Author notes
This poem includes all letters of the alphabet. It is about a beautiful woman.....who, as onlookers didn't suspect, was deadly.
Written February 12th, 2005
A contest entry
- Short And Complete [contest] by Samplette.
300 points, ended February 17, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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There is an x in the title which is also the last line of the poem. Thank you for your comment.
Love and Blessings, Ashlee -
This is beautiful. You used excellent descriptive words. That's cool that you used all of the letters of the alphabet and found words with "z". Hmm . . . you have no "x", but that's ok. It's a great poem, nevertheless. I think if you chose some other text color or background, your poem will be easier to read. Thanks for commenting on my poetry.
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I'm not sure what you mean by this: "You should use comments to explain some of the Japanese." I used all English words.
Thank you for your comment.
Love, Ashlee
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needs alittle work
It was good but in a sense bitter.You should use comments to explain some of the Japanese. It was very shot but to the point. It also seemed angry. -
You did use all the letters of the alphabet. If you hadn't explained it in your authors comment I wouldn't have understood it. It's a bit over my head, but that doesn't mean it doesn't make sense. You did a great job and I thank you so much for entering.
S♥m
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