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My New Life With Jesus

Lord I lay all my sins at your feet,
take these burdens off of me,
give me strength to fight temptation,
save me Jesus let my soul free.

Take me in your loving arms,
teach me all that you may know,
mold my life with your love,
sweet Jesus how I love you so.

How you sacrificed for my sins,
you died upon the cross that day,
my sins have all been forgiven,
I thank you Jesus as I pray.

I shall live my life for you Lord,
mold me like a piece of clay,
my heart and soul belong to you,
in my life you have come to stay.

I want to learn the words of Jesus,
I shall read the Bible each day,
I will trust in you dear Lord,
and everything you have to say.  


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Written February 12th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    February 14, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment I do appreciate it. Wonderful contest. Take care, Sandy


  • Arovell
    February 14, 2005
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    This is beatifully but simply written. I must say that i enjoy your workd because they rhyme. Almost no one is willing to put in the effort to make their poem thyme anymore. Thanks again for entering!