Inferior to its size.
unsophisticated to its structure
forlorn to its greatness
Yet;
astound to its beauty,
all other thoughts dissolved
lost in the moment of pure insanity.
300 meters up,
to view the city of love;
breathtaking,
unforgettable,
perfect.
a once in a life-time chance,
15 unforgettable people,
a moment never to be forgotten.
Author notes
it's not that great, but I thought I'd better take a chance to write about the greatest moment ever!! being at the Eiffel Tower last April.. it was Amazing(beyond the fact that I am afraid of heights) I would have killed myself for not going up and seeing what was the most beautfiul thing I have ever seen!!WOW!!
Written February 12th, 2005
A contest entry
- The Time of Your Life by Vickie J.
325 points, ended February 15, 2005, 4 entries
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