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Fate

Fate is just one thing,
You know,
Is always there.
Fate gives you something,
That you know,
Will come,
In time.
Fate can be cruel,
It can be harsh.
Fate can be kind,
It can also be beautiful.
Fate is what we,
As people,
Are always seeking.
To know,
What your fate will be,
Is what all people,
Desire,
Want,
And dream for.

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Written January 10th, 2005

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  • antibeautiful
    November 7, 2005
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    Simplistic, beautiful, and true. Lovely write.

  • pozo
    April 27, 2005
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    Wow, this is so beautiful Keep writing, this was a lovely poem which I liked a lot
    All the best,
    Pozo