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I Love You

I love you more than anything
I love the way you treat me
You make me feel loved and important
No one has ever done that for me
I've never had someone
Love me the way you do
I've never felt for anyone
The way I feel for you
Baby I can honestly say I love you
I hope this lasts forever.
In the beginning I was scared
That you'ld break my heart
Like everyone else before
You never really did that
You proved you truely cared
I'll never forget that one night
The night you saved my life
For that night you first asked me out
I was planning to end my life
If you hadn't of been there
That exact moment you were
And showed you truely cared
I wouldn't be here
So passionatly in love with you
You put up with all my drama
When no one else would
You were there for me when I needed someone to hold on to
You've always been there
Even when times were rough
Baby I love you no matter what.

Author notes

For Mikey.
Written February 11th, 2005

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  • clementine
    March 30, 2005
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    This is nice. Good Job. Thanks for entering my contest!
    xx-Kitti