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Light and Dark

Light and dark
Pain at heart
Love so sweet
Anger so bleak

Life and death
Blood and breath
Life worth living
Soul without power

Light and dark
Pain at heart
Love too sweet
Life gone wrong

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Written January 25th, 2005

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  • tenshihijimushi
    January 30, 2006
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    This poem is hard to understand at first, but I know exactly what you're talking about on a deeper level. It's hard to explain what it makes me think of, because I just can't wrap my conscious mind around it... very thought-provoking. Great work.