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What I Want

I want to feel your kiss
The touch of your tender lips
Your voice professing love
The depth of your blue eyes
Letting me drown in the truth

I want to feel your touch
The tingle of your hands
Showing me how true the words are
Making me melt and shiver
Giving me a wonderful sensation

Just let me know
Tell me how you feel
I want you to want this too

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Written February 11th, 2005

A contest entry

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