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alone again

i was left here
again
alone
a sorry excuse
for nothing
im in the corner
of my desolate
room
black
and rotten
my head is
spinning
blurred
by jumbled
emotions
tears
leak from
my eyes
my heart breaks
in my chest
my hand reaches out
hoping to grasp
something solid
someone
to save me
but
i am
alone
again

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Written February 11th, 2005

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