Ooh, ahh , make me swoon
Enter me now, My lair... your cocoon
I have but yet to grasp
The enormity of your stash
only then will we see
If your worthy of me
and at will won't you play
Oh, Baby
come this way
closer now , feel my heat
Won't you join me here, my sweet.
Ooh, ahh...so wet to the touch
my fire is your need
your body my lust
between my legs won't you lie
Says "the Spider to the fly"
My hunger is present
Without further delay
before I devour you
please sample the buffet
Ooh, ahh... how glorious your tongue
how eager you are
My web I have spun
Ooh, Ahh could it now be your turn
the laughter you hear is more than a spurn
Thank you my dear, for you have done your job right
Now that I am satisfied , I bid you good night....
Author notes
Written February 10th, 2005
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Thank you for your comment bellerophon, yes , I wanted to try my hand at something humorous...I was worried there for a minute..
And yes it was riddled with cliches and I am glad someone noticed it was in fun..Thank you again
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After noticing that you put this in the humor category I realize that you were making fun of erotic poetry. Job well done, sorry for misunderstanding your poem the first time.
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I really think that the mix of sensual language with not so subtle cheesy euphimisms didn't work well here. I felt torn between being turned on and laughing. Just try to avoid cliches in the future becasue this was otherwise a good write.
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