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Paxil

You numbed the pain

You eased the hurt

Emotion is not the same

As a poet's heart.

I can't find the wave

Of orgasmic relief

This white pill has gone

And stolen my orgasm

Like a fucking cowardly thief!

Author notes

OK, this was an attempt, I have been on antidepressants for two months now and has numbed so many thigns, is it worth it?
Written February 10th, 2005

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  • SapphireMoons
    March 26, 2005
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    Bravo

    Not really but you did a wonderful job expressing your feelings. Anti-Depressants are not the best fun in the world. Trust me I know.

    Blessed Be,

    Kayla Lynn