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Maddy my Love...

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My Maddy, my super man

you are special, great and admirable
I will die thousand times for your smile

you have everything that I wish for in a guy
and your wife is endowed with luck that nobody can buy

you are charming,you are gentle
you are calm and soo simple

If there'd be someone who can ever change me
that's none other than you sweetie

I admired your looks and your dialogues
but today iam glad that it's not the end

'coz I know you better,as a person of emotions...
A modest person..who loves his wife more than anyone else....

    I LOVE YOU MADDY!!!

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Written February 10th, 2005

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  • sugeeth
    April 3, 2007
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    not upto ur own standards... am loggin in after a long time..... its a nice one.... anyways....


  • Srinivasan
    February 23, 2005
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    Good to start with

    I enjoyed the poem though I don't encourage the mad love for maddy. You can enjoy it as you are at the perfect age for fun of these sorts. I expect poems with a message or something that we can cherish in our memory at least for sometime.


  • Return to Innocence
    February 23, 2005
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    hers the fullform of MADDY-MIGHTY ADORABLE DYNAMIC YOUNGSTER.


  • Nakshathra silver member
    February 23, 2005
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    hai karan!!thanks for ur valuable comment..

  • Nakshathra silver member
    February 23, 2005
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    thanks a lott for ur comment pink bat!!!


  • February 20, 2005
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    Lol... I never knew you were such a great fan of Madhavan! Always thought Maddy was the name of some boyfriend or stuff. The poem is extremely good (yeah, more than what dear little sweaty Maddy deserves)... and being the born masochist, I do find a sense of sadness, a subtext of irony in the poem. It's in that line "A modest person..who loves his wife more than anyone else...."
    People in India still worship their heroes, putting them on a pedestal, instead of dreaming to bed them, isn't it?

    Cheers and hope,
    Mandy
    Edited on Feb 20, 1:05 p.m. because ''.


  • February 19, 2005
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    Hi,
    Nice comb of gre8t pictur, poem, fond colour & sence of humour.
    All the best in AP!!!!
    Keep up the gre8t work!!!!
    Continue the gre8t work!!!!!

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