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I, Rock Crusher (circa 1885)

I Am a Rock Crusher

Mining silver ore at the Queen of the Hills mine
in the Little Belt Mountains near the Carpenter Creek drainage
in Neihart Canyon in the Montana mining district
just east of the Narrowgauge Gulch in 1885.


Don’t ask me to haul it, you’ll have to pack it
on horseback or ox-drawn wagons to Fort Benson
and from there by steamboat down the Missouri River
for transshipment to Swansea, Wales, for treatment
until they build the new railroad line
and construct a new smelter like the one at Barker/Hughesville
or we can take it to the Barker/Hughesville smelter
to Omaha, Nebraska,
then to New Zealand.


I work with the brain children of Thomas Edison-
conveyor belts, giant roller-grinders, cranes for heavy lifting;
I’m a huge roller-crusher- operated by steam engines
with boilers fueled by coal
and the sweat of several workers.
Inner gear workings, tons of crushing weight-
Edison, Fischer, Blake, and Gates-
they all increased me in size with every new venture.


I crush Metamorphic rock. pre-Beltian gneisses and schists
overlain by quartzites and shales,
stratified and layered over earlier schists
found in veins in the sheeted fissures of the range
from the Proterozoic sea. Not too spicy, and a pleasant aftertaste.


Then the Panic of 1893 drove silver prices down-
now I’m just an Omaha Mining Company
lithograph for you to remember me by
from the Monasch Lithograph Company of Minneapolis,
with an ornate border adorning it.


One horrible accident occurred- 
a workman, poor Phillip Dougherty,
had unwisely removed my safety gate 
while greasing machinery near me. 
He slipped on some grease, fell into my roller-crushers,
which, of course, were operating at full steam,
and was ground up so small that his remains had to be gathered in a bed sheet.

I had PGEUSD (post grind-em-up stress disorder) for several years;
and I filed a lawsuit against foolish workers.
I lost.

My giant rollers, "rock-crackers," had to be seen and heard to be appreciated.

You could hear the thunderous roar for a mile around 
accompanying the smashing and rending of massive rocks
as they disappeared from view into my gyrating jaws.


I did the work of a hundred men swinging 40 pound sledge hammers
at one fifth of the cost.
They found use for me in the construction of paved roads

where they say I changed the face of the earth.
I greatly increased production, but in some areas my sand and refuse
caused massive fish kills. Sorry, fish-
you'll be around for eons. I'm just a flash in the technological pan.

My modern cousins have
integrated programmable logic controller reversible linear material flow
spline input, reverse, 2nd, and cluster gears
and double toggle roller bearings.
Did I need those back in 1885? No. I had my gyratory crusher jaw.

I was born when mechanized mining was introduced in 1885,
but problems with spare parts and an unfamiliarity with my inner workings
made me unprofitable to all but the largest mining operations.
Once I was mired in the Mohave Desert for months
due to my weight, which was two to twelve tons, can't remember,
or don't want to admit it, my weight being too much for the wagon.
Several teams tried to rescue me.
I was eventually rescued.

I even had a town named after me- Rock Crusher, TX.
It had 400 people in its heyday.
I was housed in a tall building and was the center of activity.
Sometime during the 1930's the company tore me down,
leaving a large hole in the ground.
In 1939 Rock Crusher had a population of 25,
one small business, and scattered dwellings.
By the early 1960's the site was deserted and the hole was silted over.
That is how I ended my days as Rock Crusher, circa 1885.
Now you can buy mementos of me on eBay.

 

 

 


 

 

 

Author notes

You won't find this subject in you history book, so here it is, this mundane machine, given a little character and a small breath of life.
Written February 9th, 2005

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  • luckynsincere
    April 25, 2008

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    You always surprise me. I absolutely never know what to expect! lol. You are a man of many masks From abstract to beautiful entrancing forms, to history! lol. You are a man to put up a fight this season!! Whenever we do freebie contest.... you may write what you please This is just a place for a bit of reward for harwork and dedication Bear always looks out for the challenge

    Thanks for sharing this with me. See, it's true: We can learn something new every single day

    Mel

    keep up your work in the challenge.... you will be a force to deal with


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Cool!

    With the exception of punctuation and grammatical Flow, this is superbly penned with personification etched all over your subject...LOVED it!

     

    There is so much I could critique as a story teller, but then it would not be the grand piece of literature that is is.....so with that said....I'll just walk away from this with a smile on my face and a new lesson learned from this incredible part of history ~

     

    I think this is brilliant....but remember, when we get back into the Rounds, please keep your writes in Poetic Format, unless asked to do otherwise by your Host, Melanie :)

     

    Great job, and a wonderful experience for me this fine Saturday....Loved it!

     ....good luck with your entry,

     

    Bear ~

    Score: 98.85


    • wbiro gold member
      April 12, 2008
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      I'm assuming it's that infernal dash... (I can't stand the sight of the double dash!)


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    I have to say when I started I didn't think I would finish, but it held me all the way through. A very interesting piece of history. You certainly did breath life into the picture and my mind. Superbly penned good luck in the contest

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    April 19, 2005
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    Ohhhh, I like it! It is the type of history I would enjoy learning of. And especially if it was taught like this. I hate to say that I find history of any kind, when taught in the traditional way, bloody boring but this kept my interest and made me think a bit. Great job! And thanks for sending me to a more "manly" write! Though, your sensual and erotica are just as appealing to me. As I said, I am falling in love with your poetry! LOL!

    Hugs
    Jess


  • keyman7
    April 5, 2005
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    Quite timeless. Very interesting. Thank you.


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    April 1, 2005
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    I'm predisposed to big old machines and factories - so this was right up my alley. The second time through I really savored it. It's great how this piece of equipment grabbed your imagination. The old Bethlehem Steel Plant in PA, for instance, has a similar effect on me. These machines are so pivital in the fabric of time and place that they must have a life of their own - or at least the collective imagination of those affected. I would like to read more adventures in the life of machines. Your thorough knowledge of the subject matter made the poem that much more real and interesting. The descriptions of the towns and people were informative and added an important dimension.
    Edited on Apr 01, 7:10 p.m. because ''.


    • wbiro gold member
      May 2
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      "Adventures in the Life of Machines"... hmmm... that would make a good poetic collection...


  • x CheepPurfume
    April 1, 2005
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    O.o I saw it as was like I dont wanna read ALL of this but I did...and I really liked it. lol Nice job I enjoyed it a lot!! heh yes I'm a dork
    _-Tori-_

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