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Goodbye

Tears flow
Down my face.
Wanting to grow,
Need for grace.

Pills aren’t enough,
To take the pain away.
Life’s tough,
Seemingly becoming prey.

Like a lightening flash,
Life passes by,
Hard as a crash,
Goodbye.

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Written February 9th, 2005

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  • Nymph
    October 7, 2008
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    Fast and negative. Poignant tho, with good imagery

  • c-town nena617
    May 8, 2005
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    you described the poem very well and you made the poem flow which is great!!!