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God is my valentine

"For God so lo V ed the world,
      That He g A ve
           His on L y
          Begott E n
                So N
                    T hat whosoever
     Believeth  I n Him
         Should  N ot perish,
      But have  E verlasting life."

~John 3:16

Author notes

I don't know if this is really original, cause I'm sure someone out there had to have thought it up first. Either way, I'm posting it on here.
Written February 9th, 2005

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  • NeferMaatNetjer silver member
    July 9, 2005
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    Hmmmm... i must say i am impressed by your observation.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    July 5, 2005
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    Hey why don't you highlight the word VALENTINE in another color, it would give this write more depth.