There's a chill in the air
I'm in a place I don't want to be
I need to get away for a while
Maybe it'll do good for me
A place of calmness
And serenity
A place to reveal
My true identity
A place where no one else can be
No human anyhow
A place where I need to go
Where I want to be right now
I wonder where you think it is
The place I think of in my head
It's the place I'm going now
It's called..... BED
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The final part of a progression of six written between 2:52am and 3:59am on 26th February 2001.
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I like this...Alomst mysteriosly funny....I was think what kind of place is she tLKING ABOUT?........oH YEAH bed
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I LOVE IT!
So simple, yet so very true that I feel like I wrote the piece myself! We must be twins, for I feel exactly the same way, every word, every line. Feel free to stop by and read some of my work! Two thumbs up for you!!!!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
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good
I know how that feels. Good poem cause I think that my dreams are just wonderful. They keep my calm and sain.hahahahahah
I like it
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lol I shouldn't have read this. Not because it's bad, but i was already extremely tired and now.....i want my bed. lol Nice write.
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Very nice, the ultimate of utopian visions... yes, the dream world and the comforting feel of the "bed" as we let our bodies go and rest our heads... Very cool piece of writing!
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That was really amusing, lmao! I definitely get a kick out of poetry that starts off so.... serene and calm, and end off humourous. It always manages to make a smile smear itself across my face. Once more, kudos to you ^_^
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don't touch it!
hrm, this really makes me think about dreams and just how real they may be. Personally, I think of dreams as the subconcious trying to express itself, and I think of them as very real. Good poem, I love the ending, not something I would have seen coming. Very engaging. -
Really enjoyed reading that, great write
caf
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