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Tick Tock

Mental chains are a part of me
Tying me to something not there
Unlock me? Is it possible?
Go on, try if you dare

Times are changing
Time to move on call
How can I do that?
Each time I try, I fall

Is it time to try?
Is it time to cry?
Is it time to win?
Is it time to begin?

Begin to trust again
Put all the fears behind
I must free myself
Cos for me, love I have to find

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Part four of a progression of six written between 2:52am and 3:59am on 26th February 2001.

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  • Kain
    August 11, 2005
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    Yes, I do like this one. Your writing was at a progressive stage, all those years ago. You had not written your best, but you were making your way there. A poetic journey is a treacherous one, not to be taken lightly. But you have traveled, and gotten yourself a name in this world of poetry, in the eyes of myself and your many readers. I applaud you, not just for this poem, but for your courage in baring your soul through poetry.

    Blessings,
    Kain


  • November 23, 2004
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    This is a wonderful poem hunny. Truly beautiful

    ~~Jessica Erin

    Petal

  • Ethereal
    November 9, 2002
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    excellent

    I've been there, and you decribe it perfectly.


  • nell
    October 27, 2001
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    great write really enjoyed it