It shoots me down where I stand
I can't get up again
The tears I cry
Come upon me like a hurricane
The people think they know how I feel
But everyone's different
No one feels pain like I do
No human being is what I meant
Is everything said a waste of time?
A waste of time and mentality?
Who knows? I sure don't
But I know I've signed my fatality
All my lies, they bore me
I assume they bore my friends
Will I live or die?
Well, that really depends
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Part two of a progression of six written between 2:52am and 3:59am on 26th February 2001.
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Very Good
The perspective that looking back on things as time progresses can lend to you may help heal. You certainly poured out a lot in this one. It was raw, yet somehow subdued, kinda of a "this is how I feel, no need to shout about it" kinda thing. I like that -
Interesting.
Hmmmph. Very interesting. This has a very, Raw feel to it (In my opinion). I'm not sure what to say about this. I guess I'm speechless. This really makes me think alot about some things I'm going through, And though I don't think I can fully understand what you meant, Or what you were/are going though.. I do how that time finds a way to make thins alittle better. Sorry that my comment isn't much, But I did like this and think it's packed with plenty of emotion, Which in this case - You can never go wrong. Good job and keep the writes coming
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Mena
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You will live, you have to
This is wonderful my Duckie-ness. It's another true piece that I know comes from your heart (at the time lol)
Petal
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