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absolute zero

"tired of this life
thats slowly crumbling around me,
tired of the stupid lies,
the pity on their face,
tired of living a life
where no one truely cares,
tired of the cold inside,
feeling like i'm numb,
frozen from the world,
happiness forgoten,
depression passed
and nothing can last,
remember me as i die,
forget it was by suicide,
forget the love and joy once held.
for i lie here frozen, broken and still."

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yea wrote it like 2 mins ago.. friend made the title.. not sure just hell of depressed for some reason.. please comment
Written February 9th, 2005

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  • imgonakillusall
    February 21, 2005
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    Damn Good but sad

    Damn that was dark baby. Are you alright. Dont be so down, I love you.