Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Twilight Calling

moon glitter scatters
susurrous wind speaks my name
dark and I wander

Author notes

I chose choice 1. night.
Written February 8th, 2005

In a list

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Somnium
    February 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    There is a lot of imagery in this even though it is only 3 lines long. I also found your word usage enjoyable. Beautiful write. Thank you for entering, and good luck.