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Eternity

God
Jesus
only son
sacrificed
crucified on the cross dead and buried
Jesus rose from the dead on the third day
preach salvation
ascended
to heaven
Lord




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Written February 8th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 19, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah, alas, another comment another smile. Ummm!! Me thinks smiling is contagious. Best be careful you may find your self smiling and liking it. Thank you for the beautiful comment. Always appreciated from you. Sandy


  • shubs
    September 19, 2005
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    Praise be to the Lord for the eternal treatise that comes my way in the magnificent array of the spiritual design ..I resign to you--Shubs


  • Onfire4Jesus
    March 26, 2005
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    And yet another wonderful and amazingly Spiritualy uplifting poem!! I just love the very very few words that you use, that just explain sooo soo much!! YOu did an amazing and an excellent job at this!! Praise be unto Jesus that You are a shining light everywhere you go!! I love you my friend!! God Bless You!!