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The lines we cross

Every day my love grows deeper
and every night my heart gently weeps
I'll hold you close to me
Proof that I'll catch you when you fall
Yet it's a constant reminder of what I can't have
How foolish of me to fall for an angel
on devil's wings I fly
The black sky opens her arms
and swallows me whole for the sacrifice
I give my heart away too quickly
and in its place I bury the pain deep inside
I'll love you until memory fades
But an eternity is too long of a wait

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Written February 8th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • bird-mad girl
    February 23, 2005
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    This is very sweet. I like it. By the way, I bet you don't remember, but you commented on my 1st poem on here. Returning the favor. Sorry it took so long...
    You have talent, and I look forward to reading more of you're work! By the way, you're author page made me laugh really hard. Nice work!

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal